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He met the caretaker the
next day.
“Jaggu Bhai,” said Arun,
“I wanted to know if Bittu has been in a fire accident ever? The boy seems
pretty scared of fire.”
“Never. Though he would
often wake up perspiring and shout for his mother.”
“He knows who his mother
is?”
“How could he? He was 6
months old when someone left him at our door.”
This wasn’t leading him
anywhere. He decided to meet Bittu’s close buddies.
“Chintu, Motu, do you
know why Bittu is so scared of fire?” he asked the two boys.
They looked at each other
and then at him.
“He would often say his
mother died in a fire” said little Chintu.
Arun froze temporarily as
if he had been hit by a light pole.
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The heat was unbearable. The curtains and
upholstery had caught fire. The whole building was on fire. He was screaming for
help but there was no one to save him. He was slowly losing consciousness and
slipping into a deep sleep.
Bittu got up with a
start. It was that nightmare again. It had been recurring with an alarming
frequency. Bittu looked around. It was
terribly dark. All he could hear was the thumping of his own heart. He had
thought that coming to a new place would rid him of his nightmare, but he was so
wrong. His nightmare had recurred thrice in 3 days. That was bad. In fact, he
hated this family. All that love seemed so hollow. He wanted to run away.
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“I don’t think adopting
this little boy was the right idea” confessed Arun to his friend.
“Maybe you are right. But
you know why you adopted him, isn’t it?”
He did.
He had been having
recurring nightmares too. That woman had
tried strangulating him so many times before. You killed my son, now I’ll kill
you, she threatened. He had woken up
gasping for breath, each time pleading to be forgiven. As atonement for his
sins, he decided to adopt a little orphan boy and bring him up.
It had not taken much to
convince his wife. Their own son was terminally ill. She would need another
child to direct her affection to after he was gone.
But now he wondered if
Bittu was indeed that child he had mistakenly burnt when he put Sarla on fire. Had he come back?
He had always suspected
Sarla, his first wife, of having an affair with his best friend. He had left
her soon after Raghu was born as he had been convinced Raghu was not his son. A
few years later, someone had told him that she was about to marry that friend. In
a fit of rage, he had set her on fire with the help of his friends. But he had
not realized that Raghu had perished in that fire too. He had later married
Smita but by a cruel twist of fate, his own son was now terminally ill.
His hands trembled as he thought
of it now, and to calm his nerves, he lit a cigarette and propped it into his
mouth.
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Bittu picked up his
little bag, slung it across his shoulders and crept outside in the darkness. He
saw a figure standing in the veranda, smoking a cigarette. He had to cross that
way in order to get out. As he crouched and walked he kept his gaze steady on
that figure. As he streamed closer, he realized it was Sahay. He didn’t want to
be seen. And then his eyes fell on the hands. He stood frozen in fear! They were the same hairy hands that he had
seen strangulating his mother. He trembled with trepidation, perspiring, in
spite of the coolness of the breeze. He looked closer. Unmistakably, the same bracelet hung loosely from his wrist. An ‘A’
overlapping an ‘S’.
Then he saw the cigarette
butt fall from the hairy hands. It fell at his feet. He picked it up and walked
around the house putting every curtain on fire. He stood near Sahay’s bedroom
and threw the butt on his bed. Then he swiftly walked away without looking
back.
Aided by the breeze, the
fire had caught on and had ravaged like a wild beast. He could hear screams but
he dared not look back. The morning broke with the terrible news of how the
Sahay villa had suddenly caught fire and how poor Mr.Sahay and an unknown
person had perished in the fire. Mrs. Sahay and her son had miraculously
escaped, but there was no news of the little orphan boy they had adopted. Maybe
he died too.
Oh! Whatever goes around, comes around! A very nice gripping tale, LP! Way to go :)
ReplyDeleteThank u so much!
DeleteWhat a narrative. So very bollywoodish but so well written!
ReplyDeletehey thanks..glad u liked it!
DeleteWOW, this story had me on the edge of my seat. Brilliantly written. Well done!!!
ReplyDeleteKathy
http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
aha ! enjoyed reading both the parts .. was wondering just how much potential you have .. continuously so many good post .. respect !
ReplyDeletethanks Ankur..u made my day man!
DeleteOh God!! but you reap what you sow no... interesting story... u know i had not read yesterday's posts .. so today when i came through linky on writ up...it said the post does not exist..but since i am following you i got an update on my reader...
ReplyDeletedefinitely...! and thanks for bringing that to my notice..wonder why the previous post isn't reflecting.... maybe i made an error with the url..
DeleteI read the whole story from part 1. It was quite a revenge thriller and somewhere aptly so. What a twist of fate. A fabulously written story honestly the build up kept me going all through the end :)
ReplyDeleteRicha
thanks!
DeleteMoral of the story - Do not wear identifying ornaments when you commit a crime. :P
ReplyDeleteUBC Day 9 - "Two Peas In A Pod... Or Not"
purrfect!!!!
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