“Komal…. that’s what I
want to name her!” Sunita said excitedly, bringing her bundle of joy close to
her and tickling her tummy, making the little one squeal with delight. “Isn’t
she as soft as silk?” she asked touching the silky soft cheeks of her baby.
“Indeed she is, Suni,
Komal is what we’ll call our baby” agreed Kunal.
Everyone clapped and
cheered as the proud parents called out the baby’s name thrice in her tiny pink
ears, and the priest continued with the other naming ceremony customs.
Sunita wiped a tear as it slid down her cheeks.
“Stop watching this over and over again, Suni,” said Kunal
taking the remote from her hands and switching off the VCD, “It’ll only make
forgetting Komal harder for you.”
“You think I can ever forget her? Which mother can? It’s my
fault….”
“…..Shhhh….don’t say
that. It’s not your fault.” His voice was choked with emotions too as he
thought of that fateful day.
***********
The three of them were
holidaying in the picturesque location of Sawanpur, when the rain gods vented
their fury and turned their lives upside down.
“I’ll run down to the
lobby and try to hire a cab, ok? Let’s see if we can get some flights from the
nearest airport” Kunal had told Sunita. It had been raining too heavily and
there had been no point staying there any longer.
Then Kunal called up on the intercom.
“Suni, get my wallet,
I left it in the room.”
“Komal’s sleeping.”
“It’s ok; it won’t
take long, its just 2 floors down.”
Sunita had run down to
the lobby when there was some strange noise and someone pushed them out of the
lobby door. In the seconds that followed, the entire hotel collapsed. They had
both escaped with minor bruises, while their 6 year old Komal lay trapped in
the rubble somewhere.
They stayed for
several days amidst the ruins waiting for it all to be cleared up, but the
search had drawn a naught. Sunita had been in deep trauma over losing her only
child. She had refused to leave the place and had to be sedated before being forcefully
airlifted back home.
ohh my! :( i hope it has a happy ending....
ReplyDeletelet's hope so...
Deletecliff hanger .. waiting for rest !
ReplyDeleteit's on...
Deletehi little princess, m back after a looong time, so couldnt spend time commenting on every post as i was on a reading spree (engrossed) on most of your posts that i missed... should say now that i am very impressed that you have retained the same spark, amazing creativity and simplicity! i'll come back 4 more!
ReplyDeletewelcome back Lilac..that's a long long hiatus....hope u've come back for good!
DeleteBefore I get a heart attack, tell me this is a story,nothing to do with your life. I am requesting a reply at the earliest, please.
ReplyDeleteabsolutely a work of fiction.... so relax!
Deletebut for all we know, this could have happened in those uttarakhand floods...
so emotional. waiting ti read the next part
ReplyDeleteit's up now...
DeleteOne moment I was thrilled seeing my name there and then the story :( so sad.. you know I just realised this must be a true story of many of them in Uttarakhand this year... :( :(
ReplyDeleteThat's true SuKu ...exactly the thought that came to my mind
Deleteoh i didn't realise that.....!
Deleteand that's where the thought came from...
Please tell me it all works out fin and Komal gets back with her parents...please don't have the child... *gulps* die!! Please!!
ReplyDeletethat's what we'd all love to...
DeleteHow terribly sad! I can not imagine the devastation losing your baby would cause. I lost a baby when I was 5 months pregnant, but I can not fathom how one would survive the loss of a child you had held and nurtured and known.
ReplyDeleteKathy
http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
That must have been terrible Kathy..... my heart goes out to you.
DeleteA few weeks ago there was a devastating flood in the city of Uttarakhand..... This story derives it's origin from there...so many people were washed away, so many children lost their lives.
OMG!! How traumatic!!
ReplyDelete:(
DeleteTerrible :( so helpless against Nature's fury!!
ReplyDeleteyes.... those pictures haunt me still.
Delete:( :(
ReplyDeleteSo sad and heart wrenching..
:(
DeleteOh how sad. Well written. Now I want to know what happened next.
ReplyDeleteOh!
ReplyDeleteGosh!!! Lemme check the part 2
ReplyDeleteNo! I am seriously hoping you give a happy end here. Now I know how people feel when they see to be contd under my posts :| Waiting for more!
ReplyDeleteRicha