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An eerie silence had descended on the village. As the news
spread, villagers had started piling up near the old peepal tree. They looked
on speechlessly, wiping away a tear that seemed to occasionally flood their
eyes. The quiet itself was quite chilling. You could hear a pin drop if you
heard closely. Munni’s body hung from the branch of the tree, bearing a
testimony to the brutal way she had borne the savage of the beasts.
Munni’s little 4 year old sister looked at her in awe. What
was this new game didu was playing? Just yesterday, didu had taught her how to
swing on the tyre that hung from the same tree branch. It had been so much fun!
She had screamed in delight as the swing kissed the skies. Why was the rope
around her neck today? And why wasn’t didu swinging? Maybe it was a new game. She
would ask didu when she came down.
The silent protests had done nothing to unnerve the beasts. The
beasts had assumed the silence was out of fear.
Fear of their autocracy.
Fear of their power.
They had ravaged the village before and they would do it again. Who would stop them? The arrogance was smug on their faces. Ignorant villagers! Did they think their silence would be heard? Who would hear the silence when the loudest of voices could be easily muffled?
Fear of their autocracy.
Fear of their power.
They had ravaged the village before and they would do it again. Who would stop them? The arrogance was smug on their faces. Ignorant villagers! Did they think their silence would be heard? Who would hear the silence when the loudest of voices could be easily muffled?
The beasts had been celebrating their victory. After years of protest, the villagers had finally been tamed. There was not one voice of dissent. Their revelry had reached dizzying proportions. But what they had not anticipated was the power of silence. They had not anticipated the entire village to turn up at their den. The din of the crapulous beasts was soon drowned in the cacophony
of sharp axes, pitchforks, plows, cudgels and spears. Silence prevailed again,
and one could hear nothing except the sound of blood sputtering out of the
bodies of the beasts.
Munni had been avenged. And with that so many like her had been avenged too.
The arrogance had been pithed. They and their ilk had been taught that silence must be heard. No one would now dare to de-sanctify their village and its goddesses.
Munni had been avenged. And with that so many like her had been avenged too.
The arrogance had been pithed. They and their ilk had been taught that silence must be heard. No one would now dare to de-sanctify their village and its goddesses.
And all that could be heard after that was the sound of
silence.
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only moral enlightenment and fear can stop such people ! .. is this inspired by UP incident ?
ReplyDeleteyep...
DeleteA chilling story of silent rage that won't go unheard. I find your narration very powerful in a quiet, subdued sort of way. Maybe that's what makes it have such a strong impact on the reader. Thanks Titli for this amazing read.
ReplyDeletejust wanted to get the point across that when silence goes unheard, the common man would not think twice before taking the law into their own hands...
DeleteVery sad story.It is a mirror for the devils who roam about freely with out anf fear. Hope their conscience will arise and stop them from committing such heinous deeds.
ReplyDeletethe lawlessness of the place turns people into unbridled beasts...
Deletebrought the images of Badaun Gang Rape alive with post, nice writeup
ReplyDeleteSilent Must Be Heard
hmmm..
DeleteThe only way to stop such brutal crime against women is violent punishment given TO THE offenders . Very strong post, it really moved me, the way you wrote about the younger sister's thoughts.
ReplyDeletetrue...harsher punishments would be a deterrent...
DeleteSilence is often mistaken for fear. A very well written, touching post.
ReplyDeleteThese heinous acts are deeds of mentally deranged people. They need severe punishments, I don't think they have any conscience.
morals and conscience have almost no value today...
DeleteOMG !!
ReplyDeleteHats off, Tilti.
So much power in so few words !!
I love the way you wrote the younger sister's thoughts. Lovely.
I wish their silence is always heard !!
my wish too Sreeja...
Delete*Titli * ( facepalm...spelling mistake oopss )
ReplyDeleteand Shakespeare uncle said, what's in a name....!!
DeleteAh! Your understated narration conveys a powerful rage.
ReplyDeletemade my blood boil listening to the men in power...
DeleteOuch, this was chilling! What brilliant narration Titli, I felt goosebumps all over me.
ReplyDeletethe actual incident gave me goosebumps too....
DeletePowerful narration and relevant in context for present day. Dark realities, the society lives with. The system had to really work hard to overcome such gruesome cruelty.
ReplyDeleteyes it has to....
Deleteas mentioned above silence is a virtue but it needs to used or NOT used depending on what is going on .. we need to know that it can be mistaken for fear too ..
ReplyDeletei hope harseher punishements are given , I would say bring back capital punishment and people who do such heinous crimes need to be taught a lesson so others dont even think of it
Bikram
silence is often mistaken for fear...but there's always that calm before every storm...harsher punishments are definitely required....
DeleteSad state of affairs.... a sensitive topic well handled...
ReplyDeletesad indeed...
DeletePowerpacked writing. It is a pity that we have to witness such things in a barbaric society that we live in. My heart goes out for Munni...Hope no Munni ever face this again...
ReplyDeletei do hope the same too Jayanta...
Deleteonly I wish it often ends like it did in your post. this is one beautifully power packed writing.
ReplyDeletei wish that silence is heard and it does not have to end this way...i wish people in power do not test the limits of the patience of the common man so much that they take to arms...
DeleteAmazingly written... It was heart wrenching....
ReplyDeletei hope this kind of barbarisms end soon..
DeleteSilence must not only be heard but understood as well, and what a way to convey that. Powerful story :)
ReplyDeleteand when that doesn't happen, the outcome can be terrible....
DeleteVery well-written!
ReplyDeleteSilence does not mean there's no anger. It doesn't mean the anger has fizzled out. It normally means the anger is stored inside the person(s) and will be released some day.
yea something like a lull before the storm...how disastrous it would be to misinterpret that silence...
DeleteWhat a brilliant narration Titli! Touched beyond words. Keep writing for BAT!
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Hey thanks Sarav....that's generous!
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