Tuesday, May 13, 2014

Flowing like a river...

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Flowing like a river,throbbing with life...
ageless but not aimless...
restless but not rudderless...
animated yet not with animosity to others...
flowing single mindedly but not selfishly...
no time to rest, yet not hurried to reach anywhere.....
that's how my mind flows...my thought dissipates...
taking on a meandering fluvial contour, 
sometimes raging, at others quiet riparian....
the white sanded littoral paradise,
seems so near yet so distant...
and yet it flows unperturbed..
A halcyon over the tempestous run! 


16 comments:

  1. a free verse so powerful .. but that’s what mind do, isn’t it. ? make sense of the fragile things .. Loved the brevity, alliteration, and the roar behind the words. :)

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    1. that's what minds do....!! thank u for the kind words!

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  2. Oh wow! What powerful words! Mindblowing!

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  3. Story of my life .. I will say .. I try and try and TRYYYyyyyyyyy to live a life the flows and makes it own way .. but sadly it doesnot work that way ...

    I loved the poem .. beautiful

    Bikram

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    1. I know....the hurdles are many in living life like we want to....

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  4. "Restless but not rudderless...." this is beautiful. Restlessness is often there but to have a rudder to keep that restlessness under check and give it a river-like flow - that 's quite an accomplishment!
    A beautiful flow of words there, Titli! Very nice.

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    1. Thanks for the appreciation Beloo! really glad u liked it!

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  5. Wow...such a deep free verse ! I'm amazed at the way you've captured the depths of thoughts !

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At times our own light goes out and is rekindled by a spark from another person..deep gratitude for those who have lighted the flame within me!! your comments will be appreciated..

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