Wednesday, March 6, 2013

She....







A pretty bloom in myriad hue,
Delicate, colourful, fragrant and sweet,
She's nourished many a mind, and heart, 
And little tummies of bees and flies,
Paying the price for all her love,
Crushed and forsaken today she lies,
The nectar dry, the colour all gone,
The fragrance in jaded memories still,
On a picture frame on the wall. 

31 comments:

  1. ah, what a pity! It is very sad to hear of the death of blooms...:(( c'est a vie!!!
    Beautiful piece, little princess.

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  2. that is so true,
    we seldom get Love in return.

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    1. u read so well...exactly what i had in mind...thank u!

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  3. The nectar must never become dry. Lovely composition. Touching

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  4. Sad but true!
    Good to see you back!

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    1. thanks. my dedication to all those emotionally and physically bruised women out there..

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  5. It hurts so badly when she lives a crushed bruised life--even if she is not in a picture frame.

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  6. beautiful lines
    looking forward to see more of you :)

    -Snuffles Jay
    Connect with me someday

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    1. Thanks for dropping by SJ...will "connect" with u soon!!

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  7. I think your piece applies to people too... Sacrificing everything for others, yet get nothing in return...Oh.so sad yet lovely.

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    1. you are right, it was written from a women's point of view, the flower is merely symbolic....

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  8. Lovely poem..Strange truth indeed !!

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  9. Wonderful poetry...yes love is often forgotten...and it's really a pity on our behalf as we forget those who really love us...!!!

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  10. Beautiful lines, I liked the way you compared a flower to women!

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At times our own light goes out and is rekindled by a spark from another person..deep gratitude for those who have lighted the flame within me!! your comments will be appreciated..

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