Originating from the peaks,
Of mountains steep and high,
Gurgling and dancing and singing,
A beautiful river flows by.
It runs through plains and plateaus,
And unwinds its way out,
Of deep and green valleys,
Twisting and turning about.
It stumbles over little pebbles,
Stones and rocks and boulders,
Yet fighting its way through,
It emerges out victorious!
Pure as fire, holy as a prayer,
A crystal, clear and bright,
Shining like gold in the sun,
And like silver in moonlight!
It is a never ending saga ,
That only goes on forever.
Living in the present ,
unmindful of the past or the future.
Thus ultimately it merges,
With the vast and deep blue sea,
A confluence of determined rivers,
A heaven, it happens to be!
There are other rivers that have,
Stopped having come a little way,
Ending up as small pools of water,
Never reaching the bay.
Their existence futile and cursed,
No parched soul they quench,
Just stagnant,muddy and lifeless,
A pool of stink and stench!
Ah! To be that river!
So brave and clear and pure,
Is so blessed and divine ,
Than a filthy life endure!
(The Diwali clean up yielded this poem tucked away in a yellowed diary...written by me eons ago!! there was something about the child-like yet inspiring poem...thought i'd share....)
(Pic courtesy: Google images)
Wow....that is a really wonderful poem...tracing the entire path of a river from its origin to its mingling in the sea...beautifully portrayed...This one reminds me of Tennyson's poem The Brook
ReplyDeletethat is high praise..thanks Swarnali!
Delete"It is a never ending saga ,
ReplyDeleteThat only goes on forever.
Living in the present ,
unmindful of the past or the future." - Thoughtful
"A confluence of - determined - rivers,
A heaven, it happens to be! " - it's that touch I liked
kudos.
Thanks..
ReplyDeletei wrote this when i was in school!! to read it again now is inspirational for me..because the spirit of not giving up that we have in our childhood is lost somewhere along the way, and this really boosted my spirits! thanks from the school 'me' for reading it and liking it!
ReplyDeleteWat a Brave , Clear & Pure flow of thoughts.. U were Beautifully Blessed so long back? Great, dont loose this spirit,keep writing !
ReplyDeletehehehe..thanks..'blessed so long back'...made me smile!
DeleteLiving in the present
ReplyDeleteunmindful of the past or future
awesome lines, loved it :)
Thank u!
Deleteageless thoughts conveyed so beautifully... As you rightly said, the "never give up" spirit seems to hide itself deeper and deeper inside as we grow older, maybe we start analyzing things a lot more critically...
ReplyDeleteDiwali sure brings its share of surprises!! Happy Diwali :)
Happy Diwali! glad u liked it!
DeleteBeautiful :)
ReplyDeleteAh! finally you are here! thanks!
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