Saturday, October 26, 2013

The struggle- 55 fiction


There she was, tucked snugly into one of her books, lost in a world of her own. Unmindful of what "those" people thought about her. How did being a girl deny you the pleasure of a book? She adjusted her veil over her head and sighed. 

This was going to be one long struggle. 
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The prompt for this 55 fiction came from Vidya Sury on Write Tribe.

32 comments:

  1. Hmm...Very inspiring take on the prompt. Ok...why shouldn't I put it straight away...ur writings inspire me little princess. Loved it.

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  2. It's sometimes so hard to be a woman no? I love the thought behind this piece of 55-fiction

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    1. it is..but the best thing is some women choose to fight rather than give up..thank u!

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  3. Fantastic..in fact, the girl should stop at nothing!! ..skillfully done :)

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  4. :(
    That was heart wrenching!!

    I do wish she gets to read as much as her heart wants!!

    beautifully written

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  5. Exactly! how can d pleasure of books be denied to anybody..

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    1. sadly it is being denied to so many girls in our country and so many other countries as well...

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  6. Great one, Titli ! So much of a message in just 55 words !!
    In this free world, there are girls who need to break the barriers of religions and beliefs to attain great heights...one long struggle , indeed !!

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  7. That's excellent ...I loved it....

    Books are for everyone.... rightfully

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  8. quite a motivating write-up on determination ! well written as always :)

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    1. thank ankur! ur words are always an encouragement!

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  9. Stirred the soul! Very well written.

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  10. Loved the thought, beautifully conveyed in 55 words :)

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  11. As it should be...books for everyone. This was a lovely 55 words. ♥

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    1. thanks Kathy! inspired by thousands of girls who would like to read but cannot!

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  12. Wonderful take. Loved the fact that she's ready to take on everyone.

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    1. if determined, a woman can do anything she wants to!

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  13. Aw! A strong point put forth valiantly...

    Please follow the link to read mine:
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/10/those-landmark-days.html

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  14. Touched my heart. Beautiful take.
    Cheerz
    www.vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com

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  15. This is true of so many women who want to break free from social norms. Nicely shown in your take on the prompt.

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    1. Like I said, women just have to be determined, they can take on anyone or anything!

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  16. Nice take on the prompt. Short and powerful! :)

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