A pretty bloom in myriad hue,
Delicate, colourful, fragrant and sweet,
She's nourished many a mind, and heart,
And little tummies of bees and flies,
Paying the price for all her love,
Crushed and forsaken today she lies,
The nectar dry, the colour all gone,
The fragrance in jaded memories still,
On a picture frame on the wall.
ah, what a pity! It is very sad to hear of the death of blooms...:(( c'est a vie!!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful piece, little princess.
oui, il est ! :((
Deletethat is so true,
ReplyDeletewe seldom get Love in return.
u read so well...exactly what i had in mind...thank u!
DeletePoor flower..
ReplyDelete:(
Deletelines are so awesome
ReplyDeletethanks...
DeleteLovely poem!
ReplyDeleteRegards,
Jahid
Flashbacks
thank u jahid...
DeleteBeautiful lines Princess :)
ReplyDeletethank u Ashitha...
DeleteThe nectar must never become dry. Lovely composition. Touching
ReplyDeletethank u sir...
DeleteSad but true!
ReplyDeleteGood to see you back!
thanks. my dedication to all those emotionally and physically bruised women out there..
DeleteVery nice.
ReplyDeletethank u
DeleteIt hurts so badly when she lives a crushed bruised life--even if she is not in a picture frame.
ReplyDeletetrue...and sad.. :(
Deletebeautiful lines
ReplyDeletelooking forward to see more of you :)
-Snuffles Jay
Connect with me someday
Thanks for dropping by SJ...will "connect" with u soon!!
DeleteSo nicely written.
ReplyDeleteI think your piece applies to people too... Sacrificing everything for others, yet get nothing in return...Oh.so sad yet lovely.
ReplyDeleteyou are right, it was written from a women's point of view, the flower is merely symbolic....
DeleteLovely poem..Strange truth indeed !!
ReplyDeletethanks Sushmitha!
DeleteWonderful poetry...yes love is often forgotten...and it's really a pity on our behalf as we forget those who really love us...!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your lovely words Anjan!
DeleteBeautiful lines, I liked the way you compared a flower to women!
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